[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train

[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
well that's a relief b/c i did submit it without much thought anyway

good fauna.
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
HEYHEY I GOT SOME SPICY BOYS based off 1930s cartoons (the paragraphs got big time hecked up. real big time heckt up)

http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...es/frescar

also got some dex art for 'em already!!!

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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
dIDNY WORL OH MY GOD.
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Hullo thar everyone.
Finally took some time to finalise the Metima and submit them!

http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...ies/metima

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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...ies/abunis

ive been holding onto the abunis for like a whole year and now i bestow them upon u
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Some fish goobers!

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http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...ningpiscip

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http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissions/orcheston

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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
hi lads im using redux assistant tickets to submit a second species this round bc i had an idea and why not. introducing: Ruhi!

http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissionsspecies/ruhi

with some art

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small fortuna 2.0 "choice" inconsistency
are these kinds of reports accepted?

on page 50, Cobalt is clearly referred to as Rodney's daughter, even though her gender (among other things) is later selected on page 247

if the reader doesn't want to go with the default gender, it can be awkward looking back and seeing that Cobalt is still referred to as "her". this could be fixed just by just slipping some gender-ambiguous writing into page 50.
I tend not to draw very well, so don't expect me to do much other than look at Fortuna fanventures.
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RE: small fortuna 2.0 "choice" inconsistency
I think generally you submit a contactus or ping gime on discord, but I guess this works
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Quote: are these kinds of reports accepted?

Yep! I've merged topics as questions or error reports about the Cosmosdex topic go in this topic or can be sent by a contact us on the Cosmosdex website.

As for the error, it's actually not an error. In Cobalt's dream section she will mention if her pronoun isn't set to "she" that "Dad/Mom/Parent used to consider you his/her/ect daughter back then."

What you take away from this is up to you if your Cobalt does not go by "she." It doesn't effect plot or pop up anywhere else, other then the part where Apollo v3 and Nova mention how female aftiks eat their own eggs / act aggressive.

If you're anything but she, Apollo will mention that aftiks have a "bad habit of accidentally breaking their eggs/not doing anything when other aftiks eat their own young" and with Nova he will mention that he rather Cobalt be an annoying featherball instead of a wooping idiot.

This actually also happens with Rodney. If you pick Rodney to have the pronoun she without opening the aftik dex entry, Apollo will note that you're "Doing it wrong." But if you open the aftik entry and then pick Rodney have the pronoun she he says something along the lines of, "That's not the norm, but as you read the entry I think you know what you're doing/want so carry on."

Hope that clears it up!
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
(I accidentally submitted this twice) Here's my species I guess. http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio.../monocerii
I should have some dex art for them later this week!
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Did you leave out the personality and traits for the Monoceri? I don't see anything there...
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Yep looks like you accidentally left out Personality & Traits, that's a required bit, please post the Personality & Traits on this topic so you don't have to resubmit the whole app.
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Oh um... it seems like I didn't do those??
(Auughh Sorry) I'll Fix that.
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It's no problem everyone forgets sometimes, take your time!
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Okay, here's the personality/behavior part:

The monocerii are rather superstitious but friendly folk. Sometimes though, they can be pushy about their newest group.They are very impressionable and always open to new ideas which unfortunately includes fanatic conspiracies. Aside from always trying to convince others of the new doomsday theories, they are rather passive.

Back on their home planet They were never really threatened by anything after the said Nevra visited their planet. The predators that threatens them now are the large birds that snatch up infants.The solution to that is to blend in with the rocks, pray your not spotted, and hope your to heavy to be picked up and carried away.

There are a few body parts the monocerii has that they do not need.Those being, the sensitive ears they have to hear insects through the sandy terrain, and the horns on their head. The horns they have used to be much bigger, but due to the lack of a threat they lost use. Each horn comes in shape differing in either one or two horns. Because of their sensitivity to sound, so they are usually not found in big bustling cities. The planet that the monocerii are from is very dry and arid, with hardly any plant life. So, the monocerii have developed a strange fascination with plants or any plant based species.
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
Pon. Pon? Pon.
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Quiet. Good for an unusual opinion. Doesn't talk much.
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 9/12 So. Many. Apps.
12-23-2017

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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 12/23 Genaral improvements
http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...es/deltine
Hey look, I made a thing!

Edit: Just resubmitted it. I apologize if I wasted anyone's time.
Just a quiet introvert that likes foxes and Fortuna.
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 12/23 Genaral improvements
http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...es/taeking
Here's my submission
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 12/23 Genaral improvements
http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...ixelsplick
I made this a while back and forgot to claim it =_=;
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 12/23 Genaral improvements
Hey I noticed a recent influx of species that don't have all their required sections filled out or sections incorrectly filled out. Normally I just fix / write these myself but I sadly no longer have the time for that.

If your submitted species is missing info on their application, or is incorrectly submitted, please refill out, and resubmit your species with the required info. Remember, to please fill out applications correctly with the info provided in the application section! If it doesn't say "You can leave this blank" or "This is not required" then it is 100% required.

In a few hours I will be combing through and rejecting any species with any missing required sections or is incorrectly filled out. I will also be rejecting species that I feel do not have enough info for me to use, so if your species has only about 1 paragraph or less for things like personal I will likely be rejecting it as I'll need a bit more to work with.

You are free to resubmit your species with corrections.

I will also be deciding an end date for submissions within a week so expect that.
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 12/23 Genaral improvements
Oh, I noticed my mistakes and lack of information, I made mine a bit before I fell asleep so I didn't do much information wise, I changed some things up a bit and added a bit more.

http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...es/taeking
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 12/23 Genaral improvements
These are the peeps I am submitting. I forgot to claim em here. http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissio...ueolchrost

Edit: I have a pic of what they look like.Show
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : 12/23 Genaral improvements
I've put it off since forever but I've finally submitted the speddari and their homeplanet, cashmoney.

They look more or less like this
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