[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train

[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
Made some adjustments:

Crapdoodle-doo. I pasted the wrong text in the wrong box. Here's what Behavior was supporsed to say:
Behaviour Wrote:Azul is always on the move. He generally just stops by to rest. He won't generally be seen in one place in some time. One of the notable features of his behavior is how quickly he can disappear, like in a puff of thin air. Just have him turn in some corner or go through some door, and he's gone.

The trait that Azul is most famous for is his propensity to deliver mail to any person in the universe without fail. Have him deliver mail, and expect the recipient to receive the mail within a week no matter the distance. He is speculated to cruise around the universe in a currently unknown ship, but it has never been recorded nor documented to exist. His ship is invisible to all known sensors. His sudden appearances on planets without suitable landing sites and space ports complicates this matter.

Usually, Azul delivers mail from a verifiable and definite source, they can come from mysterious senders that are hard to trace. They're often curious items. When receivers of such item ask who sent them, he would state their name if he knew, otherwise, he would just say "a mysterious sender."

Personal accounts of speaking with Azul are sparse and scarce. He's a man of few words. If one were to strike a conversation with him, they're usually only a few exchanges long. One only has ample time to speak with him before he decides to disappear not to be seen again for some time.

There are also special occasions where Azul may approach a stranger to test his ice cream creations.
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Cageur the Notail Killer has been submitted!


Due to space constraints, I'd like to request his second name be changed to Im-Trillions, or (if there's no working around the character limit) Im-Slew would also be great.

E: Also! Can the [Abomination] trait's alt text be changed to "You can rest when they're dead."?
Claiming the dermichiti.


Everything after the line "The key feature of the dermichiti" in the physical description was supposed to be a separate paragraph.
Crap! I messed up on the diet thing! It should just be Meat and Insects!

But in any case... Here's the Motx!

Hey if you ever find an error on a page please fill this out and post it on this topic.

Spelling / Grammar Error
[b]Page[/b]: (List the page with the error.)
[b]Sentence with the error[/b]: (What is the error?)
[b]What the error is[/b]: ("The pronoun is wrong", "Their > They're" etc.)

Other Error
[b]Browser[/b]: (ex:Firefox)
[b]Did you clear your cache?[/b]: (If "No" or "I don't know" please end the error report, clear your cache, and then check if the error is still there, 80% of errors are cache related. Please do not skip this part.)
[b]Pages Affected[/b]: (List the pages affected, or at least the first page affected.)
[b]Error[/b]: (What is the error?)
[b]Screenshot[/b]: (While not required a screenshot would be nice.)
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Page: 7470
Sentence with the error: "it’s because I didn’t know who you where, the real you."
What the error is: were

Page: 7473
Sentence with the error: "Kieros just doesn’t understand the deep interecy of Don Key and her backstory"
What the error is: intricacy(?)
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Page 7455 "even a god of chaos can remove the demand of advertisers", I think the "can" is supposed to be a "can't".
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I think there might have been a typo in that last conversation with Trash?
"One time I even induced by following a guide and unleashed, (pun fully intended!!! :3c) Somnus onto my computer."
Is there a word missing after 'induced'?
Page: 7525
Sentence with the error: but animals were not apart of that group unless they were on the menu
What the error is: a part

Page: 7529
Sentence with the error: She hums in seemingly thought before speaking
What the error is: seemingly in

Page: 7539
Sentence with the error: Unfornetly I rather not get too into it right now.
What the error is: Unfortunately

Page: 7546
Sentence with the error: The signs Sbatare doing seem to be for him,
What the error is: Sbat are
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Page: 7530
Sentence w/ error: Glirny puts his head physically between Kenshi and Sbat, being far too [intrusive] for his own good.]
What the error is: [Intrusive]
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Page: Notail A-class Cosmosdex entry
Sentence with the error: When notails are saving A-classes they will dump them on Prison Planet allowing them to wonder the planet feasting on whatever doesn't run away fast enough.
What the error is: wander
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/7680
Sentence with the error: 'to see a vast Hade's ship in prime condition'
What the error is: Hades ship! Unless it belongs to mr Hade
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Can't believe I nearly spoiled a totally real plot twist. Smh.
(Also fixed that A-class mistake, apparently I missed it until now.)
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Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/3760
Sentence with error: "I have tolled on the field, and taken classes onboard the ships of those with fake faces.
Correction: 'tolled' to 'toiled'
Error: Well there’s nowhere to park a ship around here other than air base up north and the plains outside of town. I would investigate those areas for your ship. As for your crew I’ve only seen to people around, minus you two of course.

Correction(s) "other than the air base" and " Only seen two people "

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/lore/leg...eblowskowl
Error: When pretending to be a kindly, non-murderous aftik, He dresses in a friendly, and endearing fashion

Correction: aftik, he dresses
(error also on the legendary list)
Edit: actually the whole article is inconsistent and sometimes uses capital He and sometimes lowercase he

Error: O-2 is very dark, meant for location where the sun is out in full power for much of the day.
Correction: " a location" or "locations"

Error: Any ivfrid that survives delivery will oven clean their young, and then nurse them via their nub-glands.
Correction: I dont know what this sentence is meant to say but I really dont think they spray the baby down with OvenPride and leave for 30-45 minutes

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/fauna/unicorn
Error: Both the common unicorn and their subspecies have both flat teeth for grinding, as well as four sharper teeths for biting and tearing. /AND/ This same fact allows unicorns to do most of the jobs that horses have, but as unicorns are more fickled it is much easier to use the more obtainable, and reliable, horse.
Correction: teeth is already plural /AND/ "more fickle" not "more fickled"
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God. I wish they would oven clean their babies.

(All of the above has been fixed. Thank you.)
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Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4101

Error: Remember when we you weren’t invited to a wedding Raven? Remember how many people died because of the incident you caused with your apples?

the image here seems to be missing
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Aboves are fixed. Png vs gif has been my enemy all day.
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Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4109
Sentence with the error: And is this meeting the type we should be calling your wife about bull? Anyway now to run down the gods who are never come to or are unable to come for their crimes.
What the error is: should be "who never" or "who are never coming" I think!

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4135
Sentence with the error: You’re were my brother and I wish you would understand your mistakes but I see you’ve been corrupted too much.
What the error is: Should be you!

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4217
Sentence with the error: Despite the death of their leaders most don’t seem phased,
What the error is: Should be fazed!
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Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4230
Sentence: Years past, a young aftik by the name captain was helping a crew with a job when fell ill.
Error: I had chosen the default names/etc and they aren't appearing I guess?
Also for some reason Cobalt's name is replaced with Crimson
Tell me if you see anymore errors on that page, and also post snippets of all the sentences that have mistakes if possible. It should be fixed.
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Okey dokey

"Years past, a young aftik by the name captain Crimson was helping a crew with a job when [he] fell ill. [He] had to take leave and left the Apollo ship [he] owned in the care of the other crew members. [He] expected to only be out for a short while before could get back to work, but when [he] finally healed [he] found out a freak fire had started on the ship, killing all but the AI. Captain Crimson was no longer the excitable aftik [he] used to be. Years would fly by before [he] decided to head to Fortuna to find something that might end the woes or end [him]." (Missing pronouns throughout)

"Even though Captain Crimson could not tell what was going on and the space hole was closed, [he] still refused to continue to Fortuna due to grief." (Also missing a pronoun)

Other than that, though, I think it's working properly.