[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train

[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
This page from the MSPFA mirror appears to have been eaten by the redux, which skips it by going from page 4779 to page 4780 .

edit: something is also very very wrong with this page
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
@Fenny2
Please make sure to read the entire application rule section. The name of the species is capitalized incorrectly. "You" is used in the entry.
From the application rules
Quote:Keep names of species and faunas lowercased.
This is a fairly simple mistake people make. Names of species and faunas are always lowercased unless they're at the start of the sentence. For example, it's not "Those dang Humans are always floating around." it's "Those dang humans are always floating around."

Quote:Keep the tone formal.
The tone of the entry should not try to directly speak to the reader, such as using the word you, instead attempt to impersonal. An example of this would be turning “You won’t believe what aftiks do at the end of the year.” into “Many have a hard time believing what aftiks do at the end of the year.” Feel free to have your entry be comedic but do not attempt to go overboard.

@ShiningKatana
Please make sure to read the entire application rule section. Same issues as the above. There is also random capitalizations that need to be fixed.
lower than Iridium and > lower than iridium and
List are incorrectly formatted. From the application rules.
Quote:Likes and dislikes
These areas are for the common likes and dislikes of your submission. It should be formatted with every item uppercased, such as "Like1, Like2, Like3."


@SirBlizz98
Approved but do note (this isn't in the application rules so it's fine) that the [br] at the start of every section is not needed as the dex automatically spaces that.

@Everyone else
Species approved and moved to the main section.
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Species: Divirot!

https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...es/divirot
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i fixed the err0rs, s0rry f0r messing up a bit.

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Oh god I forgot I was meant to post my link.
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...es/ethraol
Ho boi
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https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/6928 and https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/6929, You and Eris talk about "the divide" and "The Divide", even though she's The Divided. Mentioned in chat but resposted here so gime doesnt forget it
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