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in which you doubt yourself.

Somewhere, somewhen, exists 'you' who knew better than to embrace them.
You envy him sometimes.

What's that in the distance?

>_
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Zephyr Nepres
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> A glinting object. The snow has melted a large crater around it.

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in which you find a woman in a snowdrift.

A snowdrift trembles in the distance.
Then a woman emerges, uniform crumpled, wobbly on her feet.

How will you react?

>_
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>Awkward hello

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in which you attempt a greeting.

"Hello," you supply, after some awkward, mutual staring.
The shadows stir hungrily under your skin.

Something's wrong, here -- but what?

>_
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her face is missing

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Myeth
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>turn around. She didn't return your hello, ain't good.

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Tuesday
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11 updoots in and I'm surprised that we're making this work, haha. Good going everyone! Whenever I get several quality suggestions per prompt I cry inside because I can't fit them all in 16 words.
11/16.
in which she has no face.

Aha. Her face has vanished.
"Don't..."
Yet she glides through the snow and to your side.

Why does this creature follow you?

>_
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Schazer
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Zephyr Nepres
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That girl is someone you sacrificed for the greater good. They like to follow you for a while.

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(05-10-2017 08:42 AM)Schazer Wrote:  Esteem among kin
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Myeth
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(05-10-2017 12:49 PM)☆ C.H.W.O.K.A ☆ Wrote:  
(05-10-2017 08:42 AM)Schazer Wrote:  Esteem among kin

Don't know what this really means but it sounds dramatic n' cool.

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Tuesday
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Quote: That girl is someone you sacrificed for the greater good. They like to follow you for a while.
this is too good to waste; other suggestion wins by popular vote but consider this background canon
12/16.
in which she's your victim, and your kin.

She caresses your cheeks. Her hands are cold; smooth; lifeless as porcelain.
You're too tired for this.

How can you use her?

>_
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>Have her carry some things for you. You are weary from walking.

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in which she carries your supplies.

"Carry these."
You drop everything but the compass and case of crystal vials.
"We continue north."

Where are you by nightfall?

>_
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Zephyr Nepres
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At the peak. You can see everything up there.

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