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Here's my stab at a non-improvised thread. Expect surrealism, mixed media (including low-poly 3D shenanigans!), a vaguely serious tone, and a cute aesthetic. :D

If you've been spoiled for the story because I'm a loudmouth in chat, please keep the speculation in spoiler tags!

ACT 0: The World In-Between

An echo of a memory permeates the void. An island and a door spring into existence, as the World In-Between prepares to accommodate a trespasser.

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You have been chosen to assist her. Lucky you! Listen closely, now: What do her memories whisper?


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My name is ­■■■■■ ■■. I'm 11 years old.
My favorite color is ____ and my favorite subject is ____.

Last week, my parents took me and my best friend, ____, to the movies.
No-one believes me—not even my parents—but something strange happened
in the theater that day...
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Quote:My name is ­■■■■■ ■■. I'm 11 years old.
My favorite color is SKY BLUE and my favorite subject is HISTORY.

Last week, my parents took me and my best friend, JACKIE, to the movies.
No-one believes me—not even my parents—but something strange happened
in the theater that day...
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Quote:My name is ­■■■■■ ■■. I'm 11 years old.
My favourite colour is purple and my favourite subject is biology.

Last week, my parents took me and my best friend, Burke, to the movies.
No-one believes me—not even my parents—but something strange happened
in the theatre that day...

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My name is ­■■■■■ ■■. I'm 11 years old.
My favorite color is orange and my favorite subject is language arts.

Last week, my parents took me and my best friend, Sam, to the movies.
No-one believes me—not even my parents—but something strange happened
in the theater that day...
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Quote:My name is ­Timathew Q. Zorg. I'm 11 years old.
My favorite color is grey and my favorite subject is bureaucracy.

Last week, my parents took me and my best friend, Spork the magical mango, to the movies.
No-one believes me—not even my parents—but something strange happened
in the theater that day...

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WHO NEEDS SLEEP WHEN U HAVE ORT

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(07-03-2017 08:52 AM)Tuesday Wrote:  

My name is ­■■■■■ ■■. I'm 11 years old.
My favorite color is Red and my favorite subject is Math.

Last week, my parents took me and my best friend,Axle, to the movies.
No-one believes me—not even my parents—but something strange happened
in the theater that day...

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Quote:>Orange
>Language Arts
>Jackie

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As our heroine's soul approaches, the echoes scramble. An orange glow bleeds into the world.

Slowly, slowly, the door swings open.

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Ah. There she is.

Let's leave you two alone.

>_
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WHO NEEDS SLEEP WHEN U HAVE ORT

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>Immediately ask to borrow some money.

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" H e l l o - h u m a n o i d - c r e a t u r e . "
" P l e a s e - i d e n t i f y - y o u r s e l f - f o r - t h e - d i r e c t o r y - o f - s t o r i e s . "
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>Arrest the trespasser

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>I don't suppose you have any idea why you're here at this moment?

Quiet. Good for an unusual opinion. Doesn't talk much.
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Quote:" H e l l o - h u m a n o i d - c r e a t u r e . "
" P l e a s e - i d e n t i f y - y o u r s e l f - f o r - t h e - d i r e c t o r y - o f - s t o r i e s . "

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"It's Aubrey again."
"...Finally."

(07-03-2017 10:31 PM)Myeth Wrote:  >"yo, howz life gurl"
>Immediately ask to borrow some money.

AUBREY
"Is this a joke?"

Quote:>I don't suppose you have any idea why you're here at this moment?

AUBREY
"I'm looking for someone."
"Don't worry, this isn't my first time 'visiting' the In-Between."
"It's been a long time, but I already know how the guide-visitor
relationship works."

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Aubrey has welcomed you into her mind. You're now privy
to her Health Bar and the contents of her Inventory.


You can view the world through both this third-person view and Aubrey's eyes.
Simply enter the <SWITCH CAMERA> command to swap between them. When examining
an item from the Inventory, you will automatically do so from Aubrey's POV.


AUBREY
"What should I call you?"

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>Call us Council. An appropriate enough name.

Quiet. Good for an unusual opinion. Doesn't talk much.
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>No.

>I'm not saying you shouldn't call us something, I'm saying to call us No.

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" [NOH] - I s - a - t y p e - o f - t h e a t e r , - i s - i t - n o t ? "
" W e - s e c o n d - t h e - n a m e - o f - [COUNCIL] . "
" W e l c o m e - b a c k - U s e r - A u b r e y . "
" H o w - c a n - w e - b e - o f - a s s i s t a n c e ? "
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>Full title Please. The Over-Council of Ostentatious Hats, Shoes, and Sundries.

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(07-04-2017 03:23 AM)Arcanuse Wrote:  >Call us Council. An appropriate enough name.

(07-04-2017 03:44 AM)Xindaris Wrote:  >No.

>I'm not saying you shouldn't call us something, I'm saying to call us No.

(07-04-2017 03:50 AM)NotABear Wrote:  " [NOH] - I s - a - t y p e - o f - t h e a t e r , - i s - i t - n o t ? "
" W e - s e c o n d - t h e - n a m e - o f - [COUNCIL] . "

(07-04-2017 04:51 AM)typeandkey Wrote:  >Full title Please. The Over-Council of Ostentatious Hats, Shoes, and Sundries.

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AUBREY
"... ... ... ..."

Aubrey gives you a moment to sort yourselves out.

AUBREY
"I'd heard of collective guides being conflicted,
but I didn't realize to what extent they were..."

AUBREY
"'Council' it is. There's no way I'll remember,
uh, whatever your full title was."

(07-04-2017 03:50 AM)NotABear Wrote:  " W e l c o m e - b a c k - U s e r - A u b r e y . "
" H o w - c a n - w e - b e - o f - a s s i s t a n c e ? "

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AUBREY
"I need your WILL."

AUBREY
"The last time I was here... it wasn't voluntary, and I never would
have escaped without my last guide's support."

She's quiet for a moment.

AUBREY
"The In-Between's strange about autonomy. We visitors may interact
with the world, but we're weaker than children unless we borrow a guide's WILL."

AUBREY
"On the other hand... for as powerful as your kind are, you can't physically
affect anyone or anything without a visitor as your proxy. No-one but me
should be able to hear you."

AUBREY
"Council..."
"I'm literally asking you to lend me your strength."
"Beyond walking and talking, I can't do much for
myself in this world. I'm defenseless."

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Aubrey closes her eyes. The void shudders. Three doors blink into being around her.

AUBREY
"Pick one. The person I'm looking for's somewhere in this world. It doesn't matter where we start."
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>Blue, to match your Nudity Obscurers and Light Devouring Look Orbs Garments and Eyes
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>Our will? I trust you have the appropriate documentation for such a transaction.
>The blue door seems like a lucky choice. I'm sure some culture out there says blue is lucky.

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" REALIGNING UNIT PARAMETERS : This unit agrees to lend you it's 'STRENGTH' and 'WILL'. Do you require a token badge from us to make use of this power? Also this unit sees no reason not to agree to the Middle Door. Until further information is provided, all three doors may as well be the same color to us. "
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"Blue shall be the door of choosing. To that place we deposit ourselves."

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>Eeny, meeny, miny, mame,
Catch a door by the frame.
If it's wrong, you've us to blame!
My guide says to pick the very best one,
so go through Y...O...Blue!
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