Lucidstuck II

Lucidstuck II
RE: Lucidstuck II
>1: Definitely do it, but warn Yienna first. If she sees Uilos chucking Derrick across the canyon, she may think he's reverted to his old ways and go ballistic.
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RE: Lucidstuck II
(12-01-2018, 08:48 PM)Shadowfyst997 Wrote: »>1: Definitely do it, but warn Yienna first. If she sees Uilos chucking Derrick across the canyon, she may think he's reverted to his old ways and go ballistic.

Okay, this is a major seconding. So a rewrite would be:

>1: Trust Ulios on his idea and do it, however, have Reggie fly over to Yienna and inform her about what they will do, so she understands the plan and doesnt get the wrong idea that Ulios is purposely doing harm and reverted to his old ways.
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RE: Lucidstuck II
(12-03-2018, 02:33 PM)Glowbomb12 Wrote: »
(12-01-2018, 08:48 PM)Shadowfyst997 Wrote: »>1: Definitely do it, but warn Yienna first. If she sees Uilos chucking Derrick across the canyon, she may think he's reverted to his old ways and go ballistic.

Okay, this is a major seconding. So a rewrite would be:

>1: Trust Ulios on his idea and do it, however, have Reggie fly over to Yienna and inform her about what they will do, so she understands the plan and doesnt get the wrong idea that Ulios is purposely doing harm and reverted to his old ways.

thirding this
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